temporary
Temporary shelter from the rain
Under the canopy of an old hotel
Time stops while she smokes
Under the canopy of an old hotel
Time stops while she smokes
Haiku is magic that captures fleeting moments with only a few words. According to the old school, a haiku should consist of a 5-7-5 syllable rhythm and include a word that suggests a season. I'd say ditch that! As long as the piece is written in three tight lines that invokes an image, it is haiku.